《剑桥雅思4~10》考官范文经典句式大全
下面是《剑桥雅思4~10》中最精彩的句子。大部分考生都有这几本书，可以参考原文，通过上下文和我的一句话点评体会这些句子在议论文写作中的妙用。
① Making the punishment fit the crime is a useful notion, which would see children being made to pick up rubbish they have dropped, clean up graffiti they have drawn, or apologise to someone they have hurt. （《剑10》，P162）
刘洪波老师点评：定语从句并列。
② Let us not forget either that traditional products, whether these be medicines, cosmetics, toys, clothes, utensils or food, provide employment for local people.（《剑10》，P166）
刘洪波老师点评：具体例子并列罗列，很有说服力。
③ Let us not forget either that traditional products, whether these be medicines, cosmetics, toys, clothes, utensils or food, provide employment for local people.（《剑10》，P166）
刘洪波老师点评：具体例子并列罗列，很有说服力。
④ Whether or not this is a good thing for the child, is a moot point.（《剑10》，P172）
刘洪波老师点评：引出辩论话题之经典句型。
⑤There are, however, some disadvantages. 《剑9》，P163
However, there may be better ways of tackling this problem. 《剑9》，P167
However, the reverse is also true. 《剑9》，P173
刘洪波老师一句话点评：考官也用这种所谓的“套句模板”，但短，言简意赅。
⑥ People should be encouraged not only to be more physically active but also to adopt a healthier lifestyle in general. 《剑9》，P167
刘洪波老师一句话点评：not only…but also…后语法成分对等。
⑦ What’s the happiest time in people’s lives: youth or old age; school, career or retirement? 《剑9》，P173
刘洪波老师一句话点评：设问开始，注意分号和逗号的功能和区别。
⑧ Those who believe teenagers are the happiest people cite their lack of responsibilities as a significant factor. 《剑9》，P173
刘洪波老师一句话点评：议论文经典句型，一句话介绍某观点和论据。
⑨ Educating children to understand the need to obey rules and respect others always begins in the home and is widely thought to be the responsibility of parents. 《剑8》，P163
刘洪波老师一句话点评：并列结构和并列句让句子变长。
⑩ Persuading manufacturers and travellers to adopt this new technology（指代上句中electric cars） would be a more effective strategy for improving air quality, especially in cities. 《剑8》，P167
刘洪波老师一句话点评：背记句型Doing sth.（方法） would be a more effective strategymethod for doing sth.（目的）
11 Some educationalists think it is more effective to educate boys and girls in single-sex schools because they believe this environment reduces distractions and encourages pupils to concentrate on their studies. （《剑8》，P173）
刘洪波老师一句话点评：一句话说清楚某观点和相关论据，3个从句嵌套。
12 Without the natural talent, continuous training would be neither attractive nor productive, and without the training, the child would not learn how to exploit and develop their talent. （《剑7》，P163）
刘洪波老师一句话点评：当完全持中立观点时，强调两者缺一不可。
13 However, even though it is unlikely that all workers do feel happy in their work, I think it is not unrealistic to promote more job satisfaction in any job.（《剑7》，P167）
刘洪波老师一句话点评：让步状语从句。
14 It often seems that the amount of money they are able to earn in a short time cannot possibly be justified by the amount of work they do. （《剑7》，P173）
刘洪波老师一句话点评：两个定语从句，对仗工整，突出了对比。
15 Those who feel that sports stars’ salaries are justified might argue that the number of professionals with real talent are very few.（《剑6》，P164）
刘洪波老师一句话点评：一句话交代某观点和相应的论据，3个从句嵌套。
16 This means that change is not always a personal option, but an inescapable fact of life, and we need to constantly adapt to keep pace with it.（《剑6》，P168
刘洪波老师一句话点评：not…but…在强调自己观点正确的同时批驳反方，夹叙夹议。
17 Spending time with other children and sharing non-virtual experiences is an important part of a child’s development that cannot be provided by a computer. （《剑6》，P172）
刘洪波老师一句话点评：定语从句表达对比含义。
18 Therefore it is important that children learn at an early age to use the equipment enthusiastically and with confidence as they will need these skills throughout their studies and working lives. （《剑6》，P172）
刘洪波老师一句话点评：学习主语从句；词汇搭配地道表达。
19 It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school.（《剑5》，P165）
刘洪波老师一句话点评：简简单单首句，朴实平淡开篇。
20 If this were not true, then we would be able to predict the behaviour and character of a person from the moment they were born. （《剑5》，P169）
刘洪波老师一句话点评：虚拟语气凸显出反方观点的荒唐不现实。
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